Friday, September 6, 2013

My Name

If my name were to go to an all white party, it would show up wearing all black. Better yet, a bright red dress that catches everyone’s eye. My name stands out and is as unique as a snowflake in a blistering storm. Embracing my name was not always easy, growing up I considered it a nuisance. I envied all of the simpler names. This was mostly because when teachers would take attendance, it was always my extravagant name that they lingered on. However, I shyly corrected them when they got it wrong, and sat embarrassed as they breezed through the rest of the kids' names. Eventually I grew increasingly annoyed by the mis-pronunciations and let others pronounce my name anyway they pleased. Fortunately, this did not sit well with me either. As time went on I grew out of my shell and had an epiphany. I told myself that my name was something to take pride in, and I should not be ashamed of it, I should be showing it off. When I reminisce on how I used to work so hard to ignore the rare and exclusive name I was blessed with, I become angry with myself. I find it funny how something I used to look down on, is now something I would not trade for anything. After all, with a person as one-of-a-kind as me, it would make sense that my name is as equally incredible and original.

12 comments:

  1. Leiyana, great job! I love your diction (word choice) because it shows your formal writing style and tone.

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  2. I love your post it relates to me and how people would mispronunce my name.

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  3. It is very important that you need to accept your name. Your name is something that will be with you your whole life, so you must learn to live with it, or better yet love it. You are a perfect example of what everyone needs to do.

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  4. It was really interesting and touching.

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  5. I like how you turned it around and started talking about how you like your name.

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  6. Your poem was very nice & I loved your word choice. I have experienced similar experiences with my name. :(

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  7. I liked the opening sentence you used

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  8. I really liked the way you put your whole paragraph together . The way you described your name at the beginning was amazing and , in my opinion, drew people into what you were talking about . Good job (:

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  9. I like how you compared your name to a snowflake in a blistering storm.

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  10. Love your Poem! My favorite part is in the beginning when you say that if your name were to go to an all white party, it will show up wearing all black. It really shows that you are confident with your name and you are not ashamed of it.

    Brieana Keaton ;)

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  11. The way you wrote this was really good. I really like your name. Leiyana is such a beautiful name. Very good job and beautiful name.

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  12. I like how you changed your mind about liking your name, because everyone should like their name. d:

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